honestly I like the aesthetic but that’s not how Japanese works buddy. if you’re gonna just transliterate the sounds then at least use katakana, and even then it’s not really proper Japanese. Just translate the sentence into Japanese next time okay
But then I look really closely at those words, and I realize that they aren't what was originally written there at all. I realize that those words are graffiti, scrawled in black over the gold inscriptions carved into the walls.